Services

I edit fiction: Fantasy, Urban, Romance, Sci-Fi, and Literary. I do not edit Horror.

I will edit manuscripts that are 40,000 to 120,000 words. Manuscripts that are over 100,000 words are subject to an additional fee of $100 per 1,000 words, up to $500. Please scroll to the bottom to see if you qualify for the affiliate discount.

For smaller manuscripts of 1,000 to 39,999 words, contact me directly to negotiate the price.

I work with authors worldwide. Manuscripts must be written in English. All transactions are done in USD.

💎Khàli’s Flow™ Manuscript Formatting: Transforms your manuscript with intentional structure, smooth flow, and clean, professional presentation. Starts at $1500

💎 Yellow Diamond – Substantive & Developmental Editing
Your manuscript receives a comprehensive, transformative edit, elevating plot, structure, pacing, and story impact to its highest potential. The full-scale, luxury-level editorial experience for authors serious about excellence. Starts at $3000

💎 Emerald – Developmental with Line Editing
A meticulous deep dive into story structure, character arcs, and language, combined with line-level refinement. Perfect for authors who want both strategic guidance and polished prose. Starts at $2500

💎 Sapphire – Copy & Line Editing
Refine clarity, flow, grammar, and style, ensuring every sentence communicates your story beautifully. Ideal for authors ready to elevate their manuscript’s readability and impact. Starts at $1500

💎 Pearl – Proofreading
Final polish for grammar, punctuation, spelling, and consistency, giving your manuscript a flawless, professional finish. Starts at $1000

💎New! Gold Editing Package–For Serial Authors & Publishers

Contact me directly to discuss customized services and pricing for this service. Serial authors and publishers receive:

• Champagne Treatment
• Writing Community privileges
• Platinum Story Vault to record character arcs, world-building, story arcs, and more!
• For Authors & Publishers seeking editing for 2 or more manuscripts

💎 Manuscript Critique
In-depth analysis of story, characters, pacing, and readability. Gain actionable feedback to strengthen your manuscript at any stage of development. Starts at $300 

💎Sensitivity Read
Thoughtful review to ensure respectful, accurate, and authentic representation of characters, cultures, and experiences, helping your story resonate with integrity. Starts at $500 

💎Champagne Treatment:

Ongoing, priority editing and support for authors—your trusted editor on call, ready to elevate every draft with a touch of luxury.

This is for writers who want hands-on mentorship, real-time feedback, and a clear path to finishing and elevating their work.

Serial clients and Publishers enjoy a discounted rate and become Champagne Members automatically. See my Gold Editing Package above. (For up to 6 consecutive titles, more for Publishers).

Includes:

• Exclusive Newsletter (1x a month)
• 10 Hours per month for mentorship contact
• 3 Video/Phone Consultations for deep-dive strategy sessions (per month)
• 20% Discount on Editing Service
• Priority Placement in my Editing Queue
• Access to the Champagne Members channel in the Lemons & Gold Writing Community
• FREE or discounted access to select events
• For Blossoming Writers OR Editing Clients

$1,200/month