Services

I edit fiction: Fantasy, Romance, Sci-Fi, and Literary. I do not edit Horror. I will edit manuscripts that are 40,000 words to 120,000. Manuscripts that are over 80,000 are subject to an additional fee. Please scroll to the botttom to see if you qualify for the affiliate discount.

I work with authors worldwide. Manuscripts must be written in English. All transactions are done in USD.

💎Sample Edit:  I will edit your first 1000 words for free. (Or try one of my Luxury Samples!)

💎Khàli’s Flow™ Manuscript Formatting: Transforms your manuscript with intentional structure, smooth flow, and clean, professional presentation. Starts at $1500

💎 Yellow Diamond – Substantive & Developmental Editing
Your manuscript receives a comprehensive, transformative edit, elevating plot, structure, pacing, and story impact to its highest potential. The full-scale, luxury-level editorial experience for authors serious about excellence. Starts at $3000

💎 Emerald – Developmental with Line Editing
A meticulous deep dive into story structure, character arcs, and language, combined with line-level refinement. Perfect for authors who want both strategic guidance and polished prose. Starts at $2500

💎 Sapphire – Copy & Line Editing
Refine clarity, flow, grammar, and style, ensuring every sentence communicates your story beautifully. Ideal for authors ready to elevate their manuscript’s readability and impact. Starts at $1500

💎 Pearl – Proofreading
Final polish for grammar, punctuation, spelling, and consistency, giving your manuscript a flawless, professional finish. Starts at $1000

💎 Manuscript Critique
In-depth analysis of story, characters, pacing, and readability. Gain actionable feedback to strengthen your manuscript at any stage of development. Starts at $300

💎Sensitivity Read
Thoughtful review to ensure respectful, accurate, and authentic representation of characters, cultures, and experiences, helping your story resonate with integrity. Starts at $500

💎Champagne Treatment:

Ongoing, priority editing and support for authors—your trusted editor on call, ready to elevate every draft with a touch of luxury.

This is for writers who want hands-on mentorship, real-time feedback, and a clear path to finishing and elevating their work.

Series clients enjoy a discounted rate for multiple installments (for up to 6 consecutive titles).

Includes:

• Exclusive Newsletter (1x a month)
• 10 Hours per month for mentorship contact
• 3 Video/Phone Consultations for deep-dive strategy sessions (per month)
• 20% Discount on Editing Service
• Priority Placement in my Editing Queue
• Access to Champagne Members channel in the Lemons & Gold Writing Community
• FREE or Discounted access to select events
• For Blossoming Writers OR Editing Clients

$1,200/month